nice loop. i can say that your animations are improving. it's smooth. although there few jerky skin tones on the left arm.
good stuff . only comment would is sfx is too loud. perhaps reduce it in half. hair animation needs improvement.
hey , nice episode . i didn't saw this earlier but well done . this a lot of work man . you deserve more views . i like how you did the sequence of scenes . my 1st critique would be the intro . it felt like the whole thing was broken . 2nd , a lot of scenes could have been played faster . examples of this is when luna is sneaking behind lolly , character pauses are taking too long for the most part . i don't want to complain about the animation . but you could do more improvements in future episode . still fun to watch .
Thanks for the feedback ^_^ yeah looking back on it there's definitely a lot of areas that could have been improved, I really need to work on timing and pacing more, as well as animation in general xD but I hope the next episode corrects some of the issues here.
this is cool stuff you got here. demo is looking good. although you may need to add more poses
Thank you Pino! We completely agree and are hard at work on more poses and better CGs, to upload and for our next projects! Thank you for taking the time to stop by, much appreciated.
this is a yummy game . a must play game
nice game . i liked it . it was entertaining and funny . good job
if you can make a better quality sound of this i'd like to use it for my game
hey man awesome stuff . i felt like being in a trance listening to this . helps me a relax during work . mind if i use this track for a speed animation video? i would like to take part on promoting your music by linking it with my post
Of course you can! Sorry for taking this long to respond, the band fell apart and I forgot about this website. You can use it wherever, bud!
:OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO goosebumps .....
Ah thank you! :D I think....goosebumps are a good thing, right? Haha! No, seriously, thank you for listening and commenting. I will work harder!
holy shit! this should be featured
i like it
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