nice loop. i can say that your animations are improving. it's smooth. although there few jerky skin tones on the left arm.
good stuff . only comment would is sfx is too loud. perhaps reduce it in half. hair animation needs improvement.
hey , nice episode . i didn't saw this earlier but well done . this a lot of work man . you deserve more views . i like how you did the sequence of scenes . my 1st critique would be the intro . it felt like the whole thing was broken . 2nd , a lot of scenes could have been played faster . examples of this is when luna is sneaking behind lolly , character pauses are taking too long for the most part . i don't want to complain about the animation . but you could do more improvements in future episode . still fun to watch .
Thanks for the feedback ^_^ yeah looking back on it there's definitely a lot of areas that could have been improved, I really need to work on timing and pacing more, as well as animation in general xD but I hope the next episode corrects some of the issues here.
great submission . nice message
looking good . magaling magaling XD . animation is good . BGM is good . everything is good . nothing to complain . this is way more better than your previous works .
hmm . scene progression is good . i liked the timing of the action with the audio . the only lacking here is the animation . this could have been way more awesome . you should have called me for that part LOL . i could have given this a 3 stars but i give it 4.5 because of the boobs . <3 boobies
there's a lot of pop to pose . could have use some inbetweens to make the animation look more smooth . anyway i give it a 4 stars for it's production value . i'm impressed with the story boarding and scene progression
for a production quality , this one is very nicely done . comment is ,...there are too many hold poses . graphics are too focused here and it lacks that "illusion of life" if you know what i mean . i felt like i'm watching a slideshow for the most part . my tip is don't put gradients on the character cuz that is a nightmare to animate . make some adlib animations for long scenes . you need to improve on lipsynch as well cuz' some dialogues are off .
anyway i adore your persereverance for coming up with something like this so five stars :D
i like the graphics . very colorfull . although i had the impression of somesort of an AMV feeling to it rather than an intro for a show . anyways, keep going and tnx for sharing
i always thought the intro for shows looked like an amv, anyway thanks for the constructive criticism means alot and thanks for the support
damn it man . that was sick as hell . i loved the camera angle transitions . that pretty tough to animate man . hats off to you sir . whew!!!
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